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Post by Deleted on Sept 9, 2018 21:37:33 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Sept 9, 2018 22:54:11 GMT -5
It was shit, but Lilianna was pretty good 😂😂😂 Seriously though, can anyone give me some feedback
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Post by Deleted on Sept 9, 2018 23:38:09 GMT -5
It was shit.. not enough clowns. 3/10!
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Sept 10, 2018 6:36:23 GMT -5
Your shoot is definitely improving, but could have used a little more focus on Alex Richards. Also, for me personally, I felt there should have been a little more back and forth discussion between Lili Rose and Estrella. The conversation came off a little one sided, and I'd have liked to see Estrella voice her own thoughts on the match/opponents a bit more. That said, you made good points when it comes to Bonnie. Your observations were clear and demonstrated that you did your homework, which counts for a lot. The screenshots were a nice touch, too. Overall, a solid rp with good shoot and a nice character development scene at the end. I look forward to seeing how things resolve with the family drama in coming weeks/months. Just keep developing your style, and you'll be on the path to gold in no time.
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