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Post by Bonnie Blue on Aug 7, 2018 8:51:14 GMT -5
I know my shoot was a little repetitive and kind of a mess, but aside from that... what do y'all think? wcfwrestling.proboards.com/thread/37656/afraid-little-sad-wolfNot limited to that one rp, of course. Any constructive criticism/suggestions/opinions are welcome. Just trying to get a feel for how the character is developing. Is Bonnie even remotely interesting to anyone but me? Am I just fooling myself? Should I go away and leave everyone alone?
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Post by Kurt Navarro on Aug 7, 2018 9:32:47 GMT -5
Of course your character is interesting! And besides, they turned this place blue in your honor! We need you, Bon!
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Post by Alex Richards on Aug 7, 2018 21:31:08 GMT -5
I think you should form a tag team with Ruby Red called the Color Squad. You can get someone named Pamela Pink to manage you.. and and and..
okay that idea is awful.
But you Bonnie Blue.. you remain awesome.
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Post by Eccentrix on Aug 8, 2018 18:24:56 GMT -5
I like the vulnerability you show in Bonnie. That came through a lot when you talked about the win over Odin Balfore. I'm interested to see the direction it goes in now after you got the win over Wolf if that brings up the confidence, or if she's still in the hunt for something bigger.
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Post by Mr Kuzchida/The Sixth on Aug 9, 2018 1:26:02 GMT -5
I don't know Bonnie very well yet, but I like the character so far! Keep up the awesome writing.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 13, 2018 20:20:36 GMT -5
Should I go away and leave everyone alone? I'm kidding, of course. Personally, I can't wait for Bonnie & Boots to meet, in whatever form that might take...
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Aug 14, 2018 6:24:52 GMT -5
Should I go away and leave everyone alone? I'm kidding, of course. Personally, I can't wait for Bonnie & Boots to meet, in whatever form that might take...
Looking forward to it!
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Post by Noble Savage on Aug 14, 2018 22:54:32 GMT -5
I really like Bonnie Blue. and the RP you linked to is actually a really fun read. I me a even if no roleplay aside, I feel like I can read a whole book from you. It's very satisfying to read hee confidence and thirst both grow and grow exponentially throughout the RP. it's the type of thing we wish we could see on "real" wrestling shows but they won't dare give us all of this. Keep up the great work
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