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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2018 16:07:05 GMT -5
Okay. Since last week I didn't really try at all I put alot of effort into this week's post. Actually had to take away some stuff because I forgot I had a 2500 limit. Haha. Feedback is welcomed. Thank you!
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Post by Sam Shields on Jul 13, 2018 21:47:47 GMT -5
Better descriptions. Good job. I don't read shoot. Not a fan of it. I like to see scenes. Yours was good considering the word limit.
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