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Post by thematthewblack on Jul 7, 2018 12:40:11 GMT -5
I’ve been out of this for awhile and coming back I feel I was a bit rusty I’d love any feedback good or bad to help me out please
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James Wolf
Mid-Carder
"Come fight me, bitch!"
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Post by James Wolf on Jul 7, 2018 18:32:46 GMT -5
I would expand on your role plays and be a little more descriptive with your work. Does Black's mother have a name. Explore hard ship some time. What sets Black apart from the rest of us and the WCF. These are things just to consider so you can add depth to your character and then the more you do it and with the right competition you will really shine like you want. Don't be afraid to go out side of your comfort zone to get there.
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