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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2018 13:39:37 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2018 20:55:57 GMT -5
Bump?
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Post by Mr. PURE! on Jul 4, 2018 21:34:58 GMT -5
As someone with little knowledge of this I did enjoy the read. However I seriously lack any knowledge of history it is very rich here for everyone..
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Post by Sam Shields on Jul 4, 2018 21:48:21 GMT -5
You have the character interaction, but need to work on scene description. Music venue, right? Small? What's playing? What style of music? How does it sound? Morning or night? Rainy? Humid?
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