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Post by Marshall Gates on Nov 12, 2017 19:35:03 GMT -5
Hey guys,
Just wanted some input on what my fellow piers thought of my first actual RP here at WCF. It's been many years since I've sat down and written one.
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Post by Marshall Gates on Nov 12, 2017 23:34:35 GMT -5
Appreciate it a million times over. My character is loosely based off my life. When I started writing it took a different turn than I originally thought. And I had meant to write about Rabid as I thought we had a 2 RP limit and was saving the 2nd RP to address him. Great advice, hoping I can continue the storyline and push it out more into the shows as you said along with some segments. Again thank you Sidney!
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Post by John Rabid on Nov 12, 2017 23:59:58 GMT -5
You need shoot my friend. Character wise you have it on lock; there's a very cool, "Every which way but loose" vibe from what you're doing. But you need to remember the match and your opponent. Take a look at some RP's from other guys here in the WCF to get a feel for what I mean. Guys like Dune, Flash, Jonny Fly, Corey Black. They know how to get it done. I don't doubt, so will you soon!
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Post by Marshall Gates on Nov 13, 2017 0:23:19 GMT -5
Will do, I agree should probably incorporate it into the written storyline other than just a pure rant.
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