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Post by Mr. Wright on Jul 12, 2017 6:33:48 GMT -5
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Post by Wade Moor on Jul 12, 2017 7:06:26 GMT -5
>hasn't even read it
It stinks.
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Post by Mr. Wright on Jul 12, 2017 7:36:51 GMT -5
On the positive side, I thought you did a good job of explaining your character's thoughts and motivations in what is a very unusual and potentially uncomfortable set of booking circumstances for him. On the "needs improvement" side, I don't feel like a left it with a sense of who this character really is and what makes him different than any other wrestler - though that might be something that comes naturally with more time. Thanks gem. I get that lack of 'who the character is' That stems from the 2k word limit. Had to try and be more match relevant I thought with the word count at play. Thanks for the kind words though, gem. You truly are a scholar and gentleman.
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Post by Oath Breaker on Jul 12, 2017 7:49:48 GMT -5
On the positive side, I thought you did a good job of explaining your character's thoughts and motivations in what is a very unusual and potentially uncomfortable set of booking circumstances for him. On the "needs improvement" side, I don't feel like a left it with a sense of who this character really is and what makes him different than any other wrestler - though that might be something that comes naturally with more time. Thanks gem. I get that lack of 'who the character is' That stems from the 2k word limit. Had to try and be more match relevant I thought with the word count at play. Thanks for the kind words though, gem. You truly are a scholar and gentleman. 2k? haven't seen 2k word limits in a long time. Do you get multiple posts per week or what?
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Post by Mr. Wright on Jul 12, 2017 8:01:18 GMT -5
TV Title match is 1 rp- 2K word limit.
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Post by Wade Moor on Jul 12, 2017 8:01:55 GMT -5
On the positive side, I thought you did a good job of explaining your character's thoughts and motivations in what is a very unusual and potentially uncomfortable set of booking circumstances for him. On the "needs improvement" side, I don't feel like a left it with a sense of who this character really is and what makes him different than any other wrestler - though that might be something that comes naturally with more time. Gem is really on the money here. >is serious this time because I actually read it It stinks. No but for real I echo SJW's sentiments here. Needs more stand out character work. The development was all there but Mr. Wright himself is kind of milly vanilly, but it will probably be better outside of a 2k limit.
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Post by David Sanchez on Jul 12, 2017 16:01:41 GMT -5
Short RP is good for short RP.
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