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May 22, 2017 3:43:59 GMT -5
Post by Vinnie on May 22, 2017 3:43:59 GMT -5
I'm interested to see what people are thinking about it
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May 22, 2017 7:32:54 GMT -5
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Post by John Rabid on May 22, 2017 7:32:54 GMT -5
I'm interested to see what people are thinking about it Great stuff. But I would suggest using more breaks in your shoot, so there are no large blocks of text.
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May 22, 2017 7:58:05 GMT -5
Post by Oath Breaker on May 22, 2017 7:58:05 GMT -5
I have to agree with Rabid. But to be fair, I've seen everyone do it even against their own better judgement.
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May 22, 2017 11:53:21 GMT -5
Post by Vinnie on May 22, 2017 11:53:21 GMT -5
thanks i know, i wouldve done so had i not had some computer crashing on me and had to get a new one and had to write the shoot at the final moment. i just wanted it up on time
but yeah i loved my work and thanks for the feedback and the compliments as well as the critique
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Jaymz
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May 22, 2017 21:14:51 GMT -5
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Post by Jaymz on May 22, 2017 21:14:51 GMT -5
Oh I see how it is!!! You won't listen to me about those paragraphs, but you'll listen to them!? ....I thought we were friends, Vinnie....
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