theudy
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Waiting for my application to be approved!
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Post by theudy on Apr 4, 2017 12:16:57 GMT -5
Another try to do something better than last.
Let me know how you feel...
I know all you guys must be really busy but a few seconds worth of time and feedback would help my longterm plans here.
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Post by FPV on Apr 4, 2017 13:23:31 GMT -5
Holy hell, that was actually an enjoyable, easy read! I feel like now I'm more intrigued about the Austin character and knowing his background is super cool. There's obviously a few issues, the formatting could use some work and more individual emphasis should be put on the shoot, but overall I'd say stuff like this has a ton of potential!
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