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Post by Teo Blaze on Jun 19, 2016 16:41:56 GMT -5
Hey guys! I'll make you a deal. I know Teddy Blaze is a bit of a departure from my old stuff, so I want to know if it's translating as well as in my head lol. But I know it's a busy time of year, so here's what I'll do. I'll trade ya! Anyone who is willing to give me feedback on my RP, featured here: Neon and Moths, Beer and BloodI will in turn provide feedback for any RP you link me to. If you want it! So, anyone interested lol?
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Post by Seth on Jun 19, 2016 23:27:46 GMT -5
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Post by Stuart Slane on Jun 20, 2016 9:17:48 GMT -5
I enjoyed the role play, especially the opening fake out. I thought it did a nice job showing that Teddy was (to paraphrase)"not a good guy, not a bad guy, but the tweener guy". The motivation behind his change in persona is interesting. I will miss pure-of-heart, white meat babyface Teo though; you did such great work with the character and it's hard to find his type in efedding. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned with him.
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Post by Teo Blaze on Jun 20, 2016 9:39:05 GMT -5
Thank you for the feedback!
I don't know that Teo is gone for good lol, I'm kind of leaving myself some wiggle room just in case, but it does get kind of exhausting after a while writing that type of persona lol. Never say never though!
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