Ace
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Post by Ace on Jun 11, 2016 20:00:38 GMT -5
Whoever takes the time to read it, let me know your thoughts. Haven't done this in years. There is a lot of back story and characters surrounding Ace. I think I did a decent job introducing some of them, so it wasn't confusing.
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Ace
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Post by Ace on Jun 16, 2016 20:59:15 GMT -5
anything?
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Post by Kevin Bishop on Jun 16, 2016 22:44:39 GMT -5
Ace, I've been reviewing people's promos and I don't claim to be an afficianto but I enjoy rping so I figured I'd toss you my two cents. I love your character's humor and he's quick witted on his feet undermining those around him to a T. For some reason I imagine him being very Edge like, not sure why and I'm not talking about the guitarist from U2. I can see where you have plenty of character development there and plenty of characters to choose from to introduce to keep your ideas fresh. Keep up the great work man and I think you're a guy to look out for, for sure.
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Ace
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Post by Ace on Jun 17, 2016 20:03:31 GMT -5
Thanks man. I've actually never heard that reference to Edge before, but I can see it. My character is generally all over the place. He's either sarcastic, witty, serious, angry, whichever. I don't try and mold him into your typical "lunatic" type character. That's overplayed. Sometimes, I wing it haha.
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