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Post by dropkickgregory on May 31, 2016 21:31:44 GMT -5
it's my first rp and just want some general feedback thanks
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Post by Henry Spearman on May 31, 2016 22:22:13 GMT -5
Character development. It's your first roleplay in the fed. I want to know who your character is. I want a quick little story or event that gives me some insight into who he is.
I am by no means the best but read my three roleplays. There is an actual story being told in the form of a flashback that happens before my promo. The reader will look at Neforian and say "here is an evil guy" but I want the reader to understand WHY Neforian is an evil guy. I want you the reader (and the judge) to develop a relationship ship with Neforian. I want you to feel for him some kind of emotion, good or bad.
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Post by dropkickgregory on May 31, 2016 22:35:30 GMT -5
awesome feedback thanks man I'll do an introduction piece tomorrow
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