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Post by Grime on Apr 9, 2015 14:46:31 GMT -5
Hey guys...
So the first of many "Anti-WCF" RPs is out and seeing as how Odin really helped with Zione, which was awesome, I'm hoping that you'll take the time to do the same for me.
To be honest reading over it again myself it does remind me a little of some of those DX skits back in the day. I wasn't going for that, but it was fun as hell writing it. Already getting some strange looks from Dark Prince and all.
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Post by Odin Balfore on Apr 9, 2015 15:49:10 GMT -5
I WILL get to this as time allows in the next few days.
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Post by Joey Flash on Apr 9, 2015 15:51:36 GMT -5
Don't make me spam you via PM you rapscallion!
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Post by Grime on Apr 9, 2015 15:54:11 GMT -5
LOL who you talking to Joey?
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Post by Joey Flash on Apr 9, 2015 16:14:41 GMT -5
The man Mr Balfore, I am proud of him doing reviews again!
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Post by Odin Balfore on Apr 9, 2015 16:18:39 GMT -5
I did 1 in the last 6 months lol
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Post by Joey Flash on Apr 9, 2015 16:22:18 GMT -5
And now you're doing a second, good job. Great effort!
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Post by marcmayhem on Apr 9, 2015 16:29:48 GMT -5
Odin has helped me with in a 6 month time frame so dude is beast mode imo
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Post by Grime on Apr 9, 2015 16:39:52 GMT -5
yeah I saw that. Great review and he was dead on with it.
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Post by Odin Balfore on Apr 10, 2015 6:11:12 GMT -5
RP: The Movement has Begun
Handler: Grime
Overview thoughts: A fantastic introduction into his Anti-WCF gimmick
RP Breakdown
Scene description: 4
Character Development: 4
Shoot: 3
Flow: 5
Overall Rating: 4.5 out of 5
Critical Review:
Physically, there is nothing wrong from this. Its all good. Nothing is bad. Its hard for me to sit here and tell you what you did right or wrong and I'm going to tell you to do anything more just to satisfy that 5 star rating. Thats not what this is about. If anything, Id say get deeper into your opponent. We are all guilty of generic shoot sometime and I fall into that trap too but gotta do something to make the shoot stand out and seal the deal against your opponent.
Suggestions:
None
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Post by darkprince on Apr 10, 2015 10:29:56 GMT -5
Damn. Wow. I knew there was something up when I walked in and grime was watching grease lol.
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Post by Grime on Apr 10, 2015 10:54:03 GMT -5
Right on Odin. I saw you posted here and my first thought was get a coffee first...so I got the coffee and well I didn't need no stinkin coffee. Thanks man. Next time I'm shooting for that 5 though.
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