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Post by Gemini Battle on Feb 18, 2015 23:02:32 GMT -5
It's up on the role play board. Peruse it, let me know what y'all think. I won't make a habit of asking for feedback. Just a revived character is all. Changed his story a bit... Well a lot... I've been shunned for unrealistic situations before... Too comic book supervillainesque... But we have 3 time machines here so I didn't think it would be a problem. thx in advance for any and everything you can say.
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Post by Thomas Uriel Bates on Feb 19, 2015 3:55:39 GMT -5
Wait, we have time machines here? Was that the blue box I saw coming in? I want one!
Anyway, to the feedback. I loved it. Speaking as someone who has had the dark character before, as well as the rich character... as well as the guy with an army.... but not as a guy with helicopter/submarines, you've got me there. Not everyone can pull off the darkness, at least back before I retired from efeds the last time. You're good.
I especially loved how you did do some research into the character, even if it's just looking at what's on these boards. I know it's what we're supposed to do, but people didn't always do that.
Of course it is unrealistic, torture a man and not have the long arm of the law come after you? Then again, we're in showbusiness. Real celebrities can commit all kinds of crime and only get probation.
Roleplaying against you so far has made me wish I came in as my dark character. I feel that would have been an epic fued.
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