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Post by Ryan Blake on Jun 15, 2011 23:05:47 GMT -5
what did you guys think of my new rp?
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Post by FPV on Jun 16, 2011 11:52:18 GMT -5
I really liked it. It was short, and simple, and yet you managed to nail the basics of a debut RP, let the reader know who you are and trash talk your opponent. My words of advice to you, add a little bit more detail to your descriptions and lengthen your RPs. Do that and I think you'll do great.
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