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Post by Deleted on Sept 13, 2009 21:33:22 GMT -5
As i've mentioned before this is my first time back in an e-fed in almost 4 years, so i know that i am rusty. So if anyone at all has any suggestions, or complaints, or basically any feedback whatsoever about my rp's or rp skills please feel free to say whatever. i'm really trying to get back in the swing of things and i know that these aren't my best but i am trying.
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Post by Seth on Sept 13, 2009 21:57:52 GMT -5
You really dont seem too rusty at all! Its your very first RP here so you dont have a whole lot of material to go on quite yet, so I'd say you did a pretty good job so far.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 14, 2009 18:00:38 GMT -5
appreciate the feedback seth, i'm one of the types of people that is usually hard on themselves so anytime i can get some sort of response im pretty appreciative. seriously though, if anyone else has any gripes, comments, or basically anything they want to say about my rp's, or if you just want to offer some tips from your own experience please feel free
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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2009 21:51:08 GMT -5
In all seriousness though, I would greatly appreciate it if people would throw some feedback at my RP's. If it's good stuff let me know, or if it's garbage that makes your eyes bleed then blast me, honestly either way I just want to hear how I'm doing so far.
Thank you.
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Post by Klayton Kruz on Oct 17, 2009 2:58:56 GMT -5
I read your RP Jay. I most say I enjoyed it a lot, better than what I can do that's for sure. Like you, I haven't rped in years. Im really looking forward to reading more of your work.  |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2009 3:00:44 GMT -5
if you liked that one...you should go the main page where all the champs are listed and the Slam/PPV cards are....and click on the RP of the week (one of mine). That was me at my best lol
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2009 10:03:32 GMT -5
I don't usually do the feedback thing but I just wanted to say I've really liked what you've been doing since you got here, and I think the one that was just posted was one of your best. Almost entirely dialogue but kept my interest the whole way through.
Also given current events I feel I should say that it's been great having you on the OOC Board and it makes me glad that I haven't just stopped looking at it, which is something I've sometimes considered when things got annoying.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2009 20:53:18 GMT -5
I don't usually do the feedback thing but I just wanted to say I've really liked what you've been doing since you got here, and I think the one that was just posted was one of your best. Almost entirely dialogue but kept my interest the whole way through. Also given current events I feel I should say that it's been great having you on the OOC Board and it makes me glad that I haven't just stopped looking at it, which is something I've sometimes considered when things got annoying. I don't know if you've noticed, but usually what I do is for each Slam I'll do two RP's. One will be descriptive with some dialouge and then the other will usually be a lot of dialouge. I like doing this to mix it up each week, that way along with an entertaining RP, I let my character's true side come out in an interview-like RP. |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2009 1:58:00 GMT -5
No lie, I seriously have the biggest f'ing headache right now after righting all of that. When I sat down to do a RP I planned on just starting it, going and finding the matches that I looked back at and maybe the intro. Next thing I know I'm finishing it up and was just like "Damn". Now my head hurts and my eyes are a little blurry.
Anyway, as usual, feel free to leave your feedback. Good? Bad? Made You Laugh? Made You Cry? Made Your Eyes Bleed? Maybe You Orgasmed A Lil Bit (Lerch I'm Looking At You)?
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Post by Doc Henry on Oct 21, 2009 17:14:27 GMT -5
Wow, you really have a hard on for Logan.... nice one though, I like the Statistics..... ;p
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Post by Deleted on Oct 29, 2009 21:52:15 GMT -5
Thought I'd flip things around for this RP. Tried to do a lot more actual RP and less dialouge, but I still feel as though it came out nicely. Thoughts?
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Post by Deleted on Nov 9, 2009 13:26:57 GMT -5
With that most recent RP....i'll be honest I never really knew where I was going with it. I was pretty much just winging it and trying to have some fun.
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Post by Johnny Reb on Nov 9, 2009 13:46:04 GMT -5
Wow...that was a really long RP. But highly entertaining. I hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it. ;D |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 9, 2009 13:57:14 GMT -5
I had a lot of fun doing it. I had myself laughing at the randomness, especially the whole dream sequence.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 15, 2009 2:23:04 GMT -5
As usual..post your feedback here.
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Post by jaci on Dec 15, 2009 3:04:25 GMT -5
Was very nice. Im in no position to really say what needs to be added or such to make it better, considering Ive only rped like 2 weeks in my life heh. Kind of scared to ask for feedback after I post mine lol.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 16, 2009 18:00:48 GMT -5
B-DAWK
I wish people would stop complaining about comparing war and football. It's a metaphor, get over it.
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Post by Logan on Dec 16, 2009 19:30:08 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Dec 18, 2009 1:19:18 GMT -5
Okay RP#2 for One is up. I realize that it is rather short compared to some of my other RP's, namely Part 1, but I did this for a reason. Part 2 is the set-up for what is going to happen in the finale and for that reason I didn't think it needed to be super long. So do no fret my friends, either Friday night or Saturday night will see my return to long RP's.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 19, 2009 18:00:01 GMT -5
Okay I know I said Part 3 would be longer, but I felt I had to post now. With this blizzard type weather hitting my area I've already lost and then regained power twice. I didn't want to risk losing power overnight and then missing the deadline tomorrow so I decided to type that one up quickly. Hopefully no one is too disappointed.
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