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Post by Jack of Blades on May 20, 2009 6:13:50 GMT -5
Really enjoyable read. Great concept as well.
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Post by Logan on May 20, 2009 9:41:50 GMT -5
Much appreciated, especially coming from you.
did you sing along when ya' read?
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Post by Jack of Blades on May 20, 2009 10:12:45 GMT -5
Hummed.
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Post by Torture on May 20, 2009 12:03:32 GMT -5
I thought it was pretty lame. The way you go back and forth between styles, Logan either annoys me, or makes me think you're getting RPs from someone else.
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Post by Corey Black on May 20, 2009 12:04:01 GMT -5
That's every time you two post to each other. Text blow jobs. |
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Post by Logan on May 20, 2009 12:14:27 GMT -5
I thought it was pretty lame. The way you go back and forth between styles, Logan either annoys me, or makes me think you're getting RPs from someone else.I did. It was influenced by someone else's ideas, Madd Dogg's. If you read Anthrax's RP, then read mine.. (being that the story was solely told off the persona and image of Johnny Anthrax) maybe you'll appreciate it more? |
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Post by Torture on May 20, 2009 12:18:27 GMT -5
I don't get it. How do you know about the story and persona and image of Johnny Anthrax? Do you know him or something? I read his, then yours. His sounds like a stereotypical RP, yours sounds like you copied someone's other RP and brought it here, or you completely just made shit up and posted it. It doesn't further you, it doesn't progress anything, and to be honest it's the furthest away from anything that I would call an .. 'RP'.
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Post by Logan on May 20, 2009 12:24:54 GMT -5
Really? Are you kiddin' me? If you can't see/understand the connection between the two..
simply..
you're an idiot and/or mentally challenged.
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Post by Torture on May 20, 2009 12:48:38 GMT -5
Maybe you can explain it to me? Why you used Johnny Anthrax in an RP? Why your RP made no sense? Please?
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Post by R. Daniels on May 20, 2009 14:56:25 GMT -5
Sorry Tort... Logan's mind is in another castle.
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Post by Seth on May 20, 2009 15:47:59 GMT -5
Maybe you can explain it to me? Why you used Johnny Anthrax in an RP? Why your RP made no sense? Please? To be fair, he used JIMMY Anthrax, not Johnny. |
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Post by Torture on May 20, 2009 15:50:58 GMT -5
Oh, I didn't say it wasn't fair. I was wondering what the point was, and I knew he used 'Jimmy', but was still trying to understand the point he was trying to convey to us as the reader? I don't understand it. The RP makes no sense to me. Which is why I want him to explain it. It has nothing to do with anyone being mentally challenged, or plain stupid. I'm just lost. I don't get it.
I'm not mad, or trying to fight or anything. I just want Logan to explain the RP so I can be like "Oh, that's why you wrote it."
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Post by Seth on May 20, 2009 15:56:58 GMT -5
I was just saying, you said he used Johnny Anthrax and I was clarifying that no, he didn't.
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Post by Torture on May 20, 2009 16:01:47 GMT -5
Yeah, well I meant it in a way of using someone similar to his. That's all.
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Post by Logan on May 20, 2009 16:17:40 GMT -5
I'm SERIOUSLY sorry you didn't get it Torture. I thought I written it out smoothly, and I'm moreso disappointed in myself if someone is confused by this story. It was simply a way to poke fun at Johnny. It was a like and dislike of Johnny Anthrax's personality/gimmick told in like a story concept form.. me just trying something different AND I really enjoyed doing it.
Like:
The story is told through a young girls eyes, a young innocent girls attraction for his 'weed smoking-booze slugging' ways. That's the jest I got of his personality from reading his RP's. You don't have to personally know someone to give off another's point of view on them. With this girls appreciation of a reject, it shows that his character strives for spot light attention by resulting to self degenerate tactics.. which, again, is me acknowledging or better said, 'poking fun at his gimmick'.
"Jimmy" NOT Johnny:
For me to link the two characters, so someone would get the point that I was basing Jimmy entirely on Johnny, I just switched the first names around, but, kept his same attitude in tact which MADE the story, MADE the entire reason for it, and, at the same time, it again, is me just mocking Johnny Anthrax in a completely different way than say, "Logan putting on a Anthrax mask". In the RP, Jimmy feels a self pleasure for his reject drug using tactics, just as Johnny does.
Dislike:
The character Logan is introduced to the RP afterwards to be the opposite of Catherine. To be the one who exposes his personality as fraud, that, by saying, he simply chooses to live the life style he does to boost his popularity. It's simply a stab at Johnny's gimmick in general. (no offense to Anthrax btw, it's an RP)
Logan:
Again. I wanted to do something different.. and I thought it was easy to follow. Easy to see that the "Logan" character isn't a professional wrestler, he's a ex bowling alley employee, it's like in a different world, but the same concept, and by concept I mean.. the story is about ripping down Jimmy's flaws, finding his strengths and weakness, and exposing them. I admit. It would've been easier to me/reader to naturally tell this story as Logan, the wrestler, addressing Johnny Anthrax, the wrestler. But doing is this way just seemed more fun and creative to me, and it's almost something I'll probably do from now on.
The "Random" Madd Dogg Lines:
Of course, that probably doesn't help anyone who feels confused. However, explaining in the beginning of the RP about asking advice from Madd Dogg, then later tying his little bits in throughout the story didn't seem random at all to me.
"Wee-Ah-Hoo... Wee-Ah-Hoo.. Wee-O-You.. Wee-Ah-Ha!" - Madd Dogg's advice for a decent promo.
Introduces Madd Dogg's 'great' advice.
"Make sure to include yourself." - Madd Dogg's advice for a decent promo
The 'Logan' character is introduced into the story.
"I'm watching Hells Kitchen. Leave me alone." - Madd Dogg's advice for a decent promo.
The final line of advice and climax to the story.
To me, this all came together pretty good when I was writing it. And again, I'm disappointed if anyone has trouble 'understanding' it or 'following' it. I personally can't see any difficulties in it. Perhaps, the reader, should just.. read.
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Post by Torture on May 20, 2009 16:33:26 GMT -5
No, I read it ten times, and I just don't understand how A) That qualifies as an RP as you hardly did anything related to an RP. You made up a character, based off his, then put him in a random situation based off of one RP at best, and then softly lobbed spitballs at him in a way to make yourself seem experienced when your whole RP style a week ago was completely different. That's what I don't understand. How you go through different styles, and how you bring two different things to make one. It's hard to follow, and it's honestly not an RP?
It was a cheap rip off of Jerry Maguire though, and that is pwn. Lol.
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Post by Logan on May 20, 2009 16:38:20 GMT -5
No, I read it ten times, and I just don't understand how A) That qualifies as an RP as you hardly did anything related to an RP. You made up a character, based off his, then put him in a random situation based off of one RP at best, and then softly lobbed spitballs at him in a way to make yourself seem experienced when your whole RP style a week ago was completely different. That's what I don't understand. How you go through different styles, and how you bring two different things to make one. It's hard to follow, and it's honestly not an RP? It was a cheap rip off of Jerry Maguire though, and that is pwn. Lol. HOW do I switch styles? If I had kept writing the same way I did since starting in 2000.. I would've blown my brains out by now. It's not an RP? Okay.. what it is it then? |
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Post by Torture on May 20, 2009 16:46:10 GMT -5
A joke? A made up story to poke fun at something in a non-competitive way. I mean, you completely went out of your way to go around everything he said and rather just RP like everyone else does in the world, you make this out to be some sort of stupid silly toilet humor joke. That's all you do is make everything a sick disgusting fucking joke. You take nothing serious.
And you fill the RP boards with like five fucking RPs about nothing with four paragraphs discussing more toilet humor.
I get more substance out of an Adam Sandler movie.
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Post by Torture on May 20, 2009 16:46:34 GMT -5
Your RPs DO make people blow their brains out. Example: Lawnmower Jones and Bobby Cairo.
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Post by Logan on May 20, 2009 17:27:47 GMT -5
You don't even know what your talking about. Your just picking a fight.
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