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Post by 'Jazzy' John McCarty on Dec 16, 2018 23:14:07 GMT -5
Feedback for my 'Piano Man' RP (apart from it not being color-coded)?
Please shit all over me and make my cry if you have to.
Cheerio!
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Post by 'Jazzy' John McCarty on Dec 19, 2018 17:33:49 GMT -5
Please?
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Post by Alex Richards on Dec 19, 2018 17:37:12 GMT -5
I dig it.. I like the fact you set up. A story for future roleplays
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Post by Vincent Augustine on Dec 19, 2018 23:40:33 GMT -5
Sorry, I somehow missed yours, been trying to give everyone some feedback who asks. That said, this was a good one. I loved the CD of the RP, it could have involved the opponent a bit more, but man it was good. I dug the tie in with the song, almost like you were living it, very clever. The flow was strong for me, I had no problem following, I did find the some the dialogue to be a bit short on the back and forth but truly did enjoy the read. I like that it is beginning to feel like you have a real solid plan for the character, and I'm getting interested to really see where this goes.
8.3/10
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Post by 'Jazzy' John McCarty on Dec 20, 2018 5:28:28 GMT -5
Thank you for the feedback!
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