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Post by Benjamin Atreyu on Mar 14, 2012 21:47:01 GMT -5
Any feedback would be much appreciated. Its been a while since I've RPed, but I'm hoping it wasn't too bad haha.
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Post by The Polar Phantasm on Mar 14, 2012 23:58:20 GMT -5
Way to bring it, man. Now we've got a match going.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 15, 2012 0:00:35 GMT -5
The indecision aspect was very intriguing. The entire descriptive process of having such an urge for that thrill of the ring, but yet the contradiction of feeling he is washed up and not welcome any longer was a DAMN good way to go for a return.
I suppose because I OOCly know that you have been out of the game for a few years, it hits me a lot more. But even someone who doesn't know that should get that sense. A ring veteran who isn't ready to hang it up just yet. Though he isn't past his prime, he feels he is. He is looking at every reason he can think of to let it go, but it isn't working.
He wants to be back. He wants the glory, the recognition, and even the punishment that comes with it. I believe that is one of the BEST return promos I have ever read. I know it it a debut for you, but taking the path of it being a return more-so than a debut worked. It worked well. I loved it.
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