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[Ayria Adams]

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[The Polar Phantasm]

I'm sort of picky about what I put in my eyes when I can help it. To your credit, I got all the way through the promo without cursing whatever Gods color text on the Internet. Thank you for not using the 'dark red-bright yellow' combo on me right after I woke up.

Personally, I always spend so much more of my promos painting a picture for the reader... it's been a while since my younger days when I just talked a lot of shit in one big rambly monologue. It totally worked, though.

Oh, and the Casey Anthony line? That shit cracked me up, and I spend two to four nights a week doing standup comedy. So take from that what you will.

-B.

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Honestly, you gave me a bit of a scare. You produced a DAMN good roleplay and I expected nothing less. When I told Jay Price that I was bringing talent with me, I was 110% serious. Ayria Adams is an awesome character and you know I feel your RPs are awesome. I kinda hoped we'd not face each other until later on, but it happened now and you gave me a run. No doubt in my mind.