Lyger Feedback

[Lyger]

Any and all would be appreciated. I haven't truly roleplayed with Lyger in over a year, so please point out what you thought was bad, and could be improved.

[Ayria Adams]

Here is my 2 cents.

It seems a bit generic.

All of it seems like it's been done before so it doesn't really stand out as something memorable. I can't tell what makes Lyger stand out as someone who should be taken seriously in WCF's roster size of like...a billion and one. His manager said four words total and his girlfriend said four words total. Are they just standing and staring awkwardly at the camera throughout this whole process?

Instead of letting Lyger doing all of the hype work, let the other two do some talking about Lyger but from their prospective.

"Here's the difference between me and the rest of you, though. I was bred better." How so? Do you jump higher? Run faster? Eat more egg mcmuffins than the average human being? All of the above? A little bit more elaboration.

On the plus side, love the picture base.

[Lyger]

Him being generic would explain why, for the most part, Lyger gets stuck in mid-card.