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Post by Jeff Purse on Feb 10, 2012 16:24:22 GMT -5
I have reasons for wanting feedback on "The death of a Salesman".
I tried something new with Jeff in the begining, I tried to make him more human I guess, and provide some more background.
Also, I really hated the whole ending, time constraints made me have to compact everything to The Society, I apologize to them because I had so much more I wanted to do.
But yeah, I would like some feedback on it please.
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Post by dangerousdon on Feb 10, 2012 23:47:32 GMT -5
I just finished reading it and I thought it was awesome! Nice glimpse into the character that is Jeff Purse. Keep up the good work!
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