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Post by Zombie DankMorris on Feb 6, 2012 23:48:32 GMT -5
first rp's up? what do you guys think?
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Post by dangerousdon on Feb 7, 2012 1:18:43 GMT -5
Pretty good job. Keep bringing it like that and you'll be one tough competitor! Good luck to you.
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Post by Jeff Purse on Feb 7, 2012 12:07:03 GMT -5
Twas good. If I have one criticism, its that, in my opinion, there is way too much swearing. Again, my opinion, but I feel if you swear that much, then it takes away from what you are actually saying, because you had some really good stuff in there. Thats my opinion.
That aside, I think it was a good rp. Good length, good descriptions, good humor, good, hard hitting points. Good job.
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