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Post by Donald Deruty on Jan 22, 2012 3:55:09 GMT -5
Ok, i will be doing a Memory Series of RPs. The flashbacks is in italics and present is normal. Any thoughts, comments, or criticism is greatly appreciated and noted. Please give thoughts.
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 5, 2012 2:05:38 GMT -5
Second RP posted. Let me know what you think. Good things and bad things, i love some criticism for me to improve and get better.
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Post by Tim on Feb 5, 2012 3:03:11 GMT -5
Best essay ever!
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Post by Logan on Feb 5, 2012 15:43:31 GMT -5
I didn't read it because I didn't have to because its just that fuckin' awesome.
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Post by Donald Deruty on Feb 5, 2012 16:06:29 GMT -5
Thanks guys. I really appreciate that you liked it so much! I thought i better bring out the big guns in this match.
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