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Dec 9, 2018 22:23:22 GMT -5
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Post by Scott Slayer on Dec 9, 2018 22:23:22 GMT -5
You know the drill, let me know how you feel about my newest RP.
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Post by Vincent Augustine on Dec 11, 2018 1:42:37 GMT -5
Dude I truly dug this one, your growth is awesome to watch. You are really starting to get the hang of things, and putting together some strong RP's. My biggest suggestion is with your shoot make sure you are staying on point, don't let your words drift, it can hurt he meaning. It's a problem that I myself have and it stems from for me thinking faster than I can type, and I get ahead of the words on the page, which then hurts my flow. But I dug what you did this week, keep up the good work.
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