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Post by Deleted on Nov 18, 2018 22:39:25 GMT -5
Please give some feedback on my latest rp. PleSe and thank you
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Post by Vincent Augustine on Nov 19, 2018 2:21:50 GMT -5
I'm going to start with I personally don't like the on camera off camera stuff, that's a personal opinion. I feel when you run your opponent down off camera it really doesn't have much barring as you made it so your opponent shouldn't be able to respond to it. To me I think you would be better served just doing it all on camera, I mean the best part of your RP in my opinion was off camera, and well like I said to me that makes it weaker. Your shoot is solid, the RP itself a bit short, and the CD was not super flushed out in my opinion. It's a solid RP around a 6/10.
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